Monday, March 22, 2010
Camp recount
Clicety-clack clicety-clack went the train as Rm 6 set off on our journey. In the morning,we were going over the massive bridge. When I looked down, it looked like I was not on the Earth and then it disappeared into pitch black. It was a tunnel! We rushed to the observation deck, sprinting through the carriages and racing past people. As the train rocked us side to side.When we got there we had missed the tunel but there was the great site of the green mountains and the blue sky with white fluffy clouds. I felt so excited to be on a train for the first time.
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Great hook Hugh! You made me want to read on.
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Very well written Hugh, great work. Mum
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