Tuesday, October 26, 2010

What i am proud of

One thing i am proud of: My clay elephant

How I now I have done well: It looks really good were I attached other pieces of clay to my elephant.

What is my next step : To add more detail to my clay.

Thursday, October 7, 2010

Hugh's Speech


Here's what your classmates had to say about your speech:

3 Stars

- repetition - kept returning to the topic

- pauses at the end of sentences

- some eye contact

Wish

- volume - too quiet